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Selena
18-11-2005, 12:45 AM
love u, i will, love u i shall
u will always be my only gal
loving u with all my heart
never wanting us to be apart

we started out just as friend
love wasnt intend
now i fell in love with u
knowing u love me 2

every morning when i wake up
the first thing i think about is u
u r the sweet baby in my heart
and yea, u r quite smart

everytime when u not here
i miss u very much, u hear
when u r here wit me
my heart seems to jump up and down

i will love u forever
never want to let u go
stay with me honey
and my love for u will surely grow
luv

nhoc_le_loi000
18-11-2005, 12:57 AM
be happy baby, u r smile girl right,im so sorry but i don't know how to say nice words ,hahahaa

Selena
18-11-2005, 01:00 AM
hì hì thanks nhoc le loi , sometime i'm a smile girl and sometime cry girl 2 :-p hì hì ^_* thanks 4 ur commention about that ...

I miss the way you looked at me
into my eyes deeply
I miss the way you smiled at me
putting a big smile on my face
I miss the way you hugged me
with your warm embrace
i miss the way you make me happy
bringing me joy and laughter
I miss the way you would sing to me
makes me feeling special
I miss everything you done for me
making my life a whole
I want you back in my life
i want you to know that
I will always miss you

That're some pieces of poem i wrote for someone b3 4 , it like a kid poem right ? :)

tuananh_vn
18-11-2005, 02:08 AM
Can i share with u a little poem Trang ?
I like tthe way u wrote a poem like this one , it's natural and lovely ^^ kêep going

it hurt so much when u left me
inside of me was all torn up, cant u see
every time just thinking of you
i see myself as a fool

why love so much then now hurt
u should of warn me with an alert
to not go too deep
because this was just a dream in my sleep

Tani
18-11-2005, 03:35 AM
Repetion emphasis that you miss the way where u had good time with ur love...It's wonderful for people who can make Trang feel happy!
Ur poem's quite sad,right? I hope I'll read another poem that be not sad like this.Anyway it's great!

tuananh_vn
18-11-2005, 03:42 AM
it's not sad Man , it seems they're really inlove and they had a wonderful time 2gether such as the way she told , it's right Trang ? I can feel that .... ^^

*Yumi*
18-11-2005, 05:48 AM
yeah ,i agree w TA ,this poem isn't sad ......
I love ssTr because she isn't only beautiful but she also can makes me happy when she posts these topics ....i love this poem ,2 :D :lol:...so glad :D

Selena
18-11-2005, 06:00 AM
thanks bro Tuấn Anh , u have a nice poem too continue bro ^_*
but ur poem is sad right ? :)
Tani: i don't think this one is sad i don't know why did u say that hì hì anyways thanks for read this kid poem ^.^
Yumi: are u pround of me ? thanks for that yumi , u always say the things make me happy 2 :)

x2uz21.o2O5
18-11-2005, 06:05 AM
sometimes i dont under...