Short Fanfiction (vampire warning O_o)

[DarkChillyHeart]

This is a story I wrote when I was bored in Language Art class. Enjoy ;)

She stood there, red eyes fixed at the crumbled bodies. Her mouth hanging, showing four pearly white fangs, crimson liquid dripping from the tip. The girl's clothes were tattered, blood slid slowly down her creamy legs. Sharp nails were digging in the torn palms, scarlet liquid flowed freely from them.

Then she fell to her knees. Shaking hands were brought to the dry, parch lips. The soft flesh dart from inside her mouth to catch the crimson droplet. The girl's eyes widen, then shut tight. A sound came from her throat, almost like a purr. When her eyes snapped open, the shape of her eyes become sharp. The round pupils turn to slits, giving the impression of a cat ready for the hunt.

"Sweet," the girl whisper.

In a blink of an eye, she vanished.

[letue]

oh yeah!!!
could you write the whole story? please ^^

[DarkChillyHeart]

Here's the next part I have in my notebook

The man walked swiftly down the road, looking back from time to time. He had this feeling of being watched, but always found no one. The sun set slowly, darkness started to take over. The man hurried on, sweating furiously.

Suddenly, the man was thrown on his back. His shirt collar was grabbed and he was plunged into the icy river nearby. Numbness started to seep in, even when his body work extra hard to keep him warm. When he was pulled up, the man was caught in the cold, emotionless red eyes that seem to bored into his being. The figure lean closer, and then....

A high pitch scream rang throughout the place, but no one heard it. Lying in the river was what the man had been. His whole body crumbled and sink in the icy water. The figure's small hand wiped at the blood dripping from the fangs.

"Disgusting," she muttered "Blood of men who had committed sin were always tainted. Never shall I drink their blood as emergency supplies again. The only blood that taste the sweetest is of a pure maiden. I wonder if I can find one like her..."

Thunder suddenly clapped. The flash came a few seconds later. The man floatted up so that his back was visible. But the girl was nowhere to be seen.

[letue]

have an idea,
why dont we make a topic where we can post or write English stories .

[mattim]

very enjoy your story...waiting for the next one. Thanks for sharing.

[DarkChillyHeart]

letue: yeah, we should have a box for Tác Giả Là Tôi in English. It'll be nice for people who want to write stories and could have other people to help them.

Glad you enjoy the mysterious vampire story :sr:

[letue]

to dark: yep, but we dont need a big box:)
just make a topic then continue to post stories

[bòcon_nosua]

but can u post it longer?
i agreed with u.we need the box like "tác giả là tôi " in english.but i think.u can stick your topic in that box it s easier