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Hiennie*
15-03-2008, 02:50 PM
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Confusesd about the charater?
Left Girl: Han Byul
Middle girl: Mi Ae
Top Right: TaeHyung
Bottom middle:WooHyuk
Three Girls: Mi Ae's followers


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[[Prologue]]




~Valentine’s Day~

The cries of a baby were heard throughout the peaceful city.

The father smiled in happiness.

After washing the baby, the mother laid on the bed, smiling as the doctor lays the baby next to the mother.

After the doctors and nurses left, the father sat by the mother’s side.

“Ji Yung, what should we name him?” The father asked as he held his baby.

Ji Yung smiled, “I don’t know. You named him.”



“Let’s name him…



TaeHyung…”

“I like that…” Ji Yung smiled at her baby, “Yoo TaeHyung…our Yoo TaeHyung…”



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On the other side of the building, a baby was just born.

“Congratulation Mrs. Ahn, you have a girl.” The doctor smiled.

Mrs. Ahn smiled proudly, then looks at his wife, Eun Jin, he hugs her tightly, “Eun Jin…my Eun Jin…we got a girl…” He whispers.

Eun Jin smiled and nodded.

“What should we name her, honey?” She asked.

The doctor came in with the crying baby, handing it to the mother.

The father thought for a moment, “Hm…we should ask her…”

The father lean close to the baby, “How about…Min Jung…”

The baby cried.

“Alright alright…what about…Su Jung…”

The baby cried again.

“Ok ok…what about…Soo Jin?”

The baby cried again.

Eun Jin laughs, “Here let me try…ok…let’s see…what about Ka Hee?”

The baby cries even louder.

“What about Han Byul?” The father quickly asked.

The baby stopped crying and stared confusedly at her daddy.

“Honey, I think she likes that name. Let’s call her…Han Byul..” Eun Jin smiled, “Ahn Han Byul.”





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Shakira-hippy
15-03-2008, 05:47 PM
Gud introduction.... Keeep going guy! :D

Hiennie*
16-03-2008, 07:43 AM
[[Chapter One]]…

~6 years later~

Town---Pusan

The 6 years old girl was running towards her parents.

“Look mommy, and daddy, I fwound a rock that is shape like a heart =D!” She held up her hand high for her parents to see, smiling widely.

The parent looks at each other and smiled, then looks back at their daughter, Han Byul.

“That’s great honey.” The mother spoke.

Han Byul smiled widely, showing her prefect white teeth, then went back to the playground where every children plays.



At the end of the day, Han Byul came running to her parents again, “Mommy, daddy, I found a new fwend! She’s soo nice!”

“That’s good to hear.” The father laughs and picks up Han Byul to his height, then piggyback her home.

“*Yawn*…daddy. Me is tire…*yawn*.” Han Byul said, and then laid her head on her dad’s back.

“Go to seep, my twinkie star.” Said the father.

“Ok! =D!” Han Byul quickly fell asleep.

….

………

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“Eun Jin, Han Byul will grow up to be a beautiful lady like you someday.”

“Awe…and she’s going to be a strong girl just like you.” Eun Jin laughs.

“Eun Jin…although we’re not rich like we picture when we were young, at least…we love each other…and our child here…then nothing would matter.”

Eun Jin smiled, and nodded.



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-The Night-

~11 pm~

A six years old boy ran away from home again. Why you ask?

Simple.

It’s because he hates his life. He hated everything. Although he was still six, he knew how to do everything already. He had been tutor when he was four, learning all the things he needs to learn. That is why he’s very smart for a six years old boy, who can speak properly.

He was rich, lives in a really fancy place, got his own room, his own computer, his own library room, and his own two bathrooms. He got everything, but he has he’d never got one thing.

A first grade boy knew he could never get…

Love…from his parents.

His parents would argue every single night.

He hated it. He hates everything.

He ran to the playground, and sat on the swing.

On his birthday, he never remembers seeing his parents smiled, or celebrates his birthday like every parent would have to their kids.

Instead, his parents would just simply give him his presents then went to work. Not even going to say, “Happy Birthday.”

Just a word they say to him before going to work, “Here.”





His birthday was next week, on Valentine’s Day.

“Umma…Appa…just say Happy Birthday to me…just once…



Then I will be happy.” The boy whispered

His name…TaeHyung.



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“Han Byul sweetie. Hurry honey, get ready and I will drive you to school.” The mother shook her daughter.

Han Byul opens her eyes happily, “School =D! Ok!” Han Byul went to the bathroom, then combs her hair, wash her face, brush her teeth, and wore her uniform, puts on her small little black dress shoes.

“I’m ready umma! =D!”

“Hold on honey, let me tie your hair first.” The mother said, then lays Han Byul on her lap, tying two high ponytails, one on the left and other on the right with Han Byul’s hair.

Han Byul smiled widely, “Ok! Let’s go to school!” Han Byul dragged her mother’s hand to the car with her little hand.

The mother laughs, “Ok. Ok.”



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“I said I’m not going to school!!!” TaeHyung yelled.

“Son, if I said go, then go. Don’t argue with me. And where did you go last night?” The father demanded some answers.

“I said I don’t wanna go, and I didn’t go anywhere last night.” TaeHyung was a stubborn boy who doesn’t care for anything. A boy who doesn’t answer questions coming his way. A boy who hates his life. A boy who ignores everyone. A boy who…wants love from his parents.



The father sigh, “Fine…but just go to school.”

“No!! I said I’m not going!!!” The little TaeHyung yelled.

“Don’t make me do it the hard way, son.”

“I said I’m not going!!! NOO, I’m not going!!!”

The father picked up the little boy, and went inside the car, then drove to school.







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It has been minutes, TaeHyung stared at the clock, it has been hours, TaeHyung stared at his expensive watch, it has been days, and he had been staring at the moon.

And today, indeed, it’s his birthday.

But his parents has already left him home alone, along with the maid, no presents this time. Nothing.

Nothing at all.



Not even a little card. Nothing.

TaeHyung sat in his room, staring out his window. His hand, supporting his head, the sun was setting, his birthday, he made a wish…a wish he knew would never come true, but he still wished it to be true.

‘I wish…I would find love…or…maybe…love would find me.’



A drop of tear fell.

‘One wish is enough.’



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It was night.

TaeHyung went out again, he went to the very same park he would go to.



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Han Byul smiled, then she sneaked out of her window.

‘Just this once.’ Han Byul thought.

Han Byul had her own room, so no one saw her.

Han Byul went to the park, while carrying her presents her parents got for her, a white fluffy bunny, which was half her size.

Han Byul happily skipped her way to the swing, but stopped when she saw a little boy her age, sitting there, looking down at the ground.

“…”

Han Byul thought of what her mother always teaches her, ‘Never talk to stranger. Or get near them.’

‘But he is just like me, he wants to play on swing! =D!’ Han Byul thought as she skipped her way to the little boy.



“Hi! I’m Ahn Han Byul! =D!” Han Byul frowned, “Why are you crying?” Han Byul asked puzzling with questioning looks.

The little boy quickly wipes away his tears, and then looks up at Han Byul.

His face turned angry, “Leave me alone.”

“Why? Are you sad? Don’t bwe sad.”

TaeHyung looks at her face to her Bunny.



Han Byul notice he was staring at her bunny, then she smiled, “This is my bwunny! You can have it! I got it from my Bwirthday today! =D!”

TaeHyung’s facial expression change from angry to hurt.

“B-birthday?” He asked.

Han Byul nodded happily.

“Here XD!”
Han Byul handed her bunny to TaeHyung.

“I want you to have it! So don’t be sad anymore! =D! Since itz my bwirthday presents, I’m giving two yew for your early bwirthday pwesents! =D! ”

“Bye Bye now! Mommy must bwe worry!” Han Byul happily skipped off.



TaeHyung looks at her, then he whispers, “…Ahn Han Byul...” He memorized her named.

Then looks back at the bunny.

A sad smiled showed on his face.

“Thank you.”

lừa_đảo_tiểu_thư
19-03-2008, 02:58 AM
poor the boy. thanks 4 sharing

Hiennie*
20-03-2008, 07:24 AM
[[Chapter ThRee]]



~Dreams~



I was standing in front of a school. A school that I have never seen before.

Where am I?





But why do I get these feelings that I’ve been to this place a million times?



“Han Byul…”

I turned around.

Hey! =D!

It’s the little boy!



No…don’t go away…are you still sad?



“Han Byul.”

I turned back around.

=O…*Drools*

Woah. Who is that…guy? Man, he’s hott.

…But

How come…it seems like I’ve seen him before…

I turned back at the boy, but he was gone, then I turned back at the guy.



His eyes…looks just like the boy.

“Who…are you?”

No answered.

“Hello?”



Soon, he started to fade into the darkness.

….

Then…

I saw myself walking down strange streets…

I’m lost….I’m way lost….
……
God, if you help me find my way back home I promise I will become really REALLY good…well….I’ll just become better…

I kept on walking and notice I’m at a park. I slowly sat on the swing and swing myself back and forth.

“Look what we got here, beautiful isn’t she?” A voice was behind me and I know for sure it was a guy’s voice.

Huh?

I turned around…who the heck is he?

“So we finally found you…Han Byul…” The guy smiled, then 3 other guys back him up.

What the heck is going on?

I look at them with questioning look.

“Do I know you?” I asked.

“No…but you do know TaeHyung.”

“What about him?” I asked.


From above, I saw myself talking to strangers. And who’s TaeHyung?


“Shut your trap, b.tch.” The guy covered my mouth while I struggled to get out.

What’s going on??? I look down below, I was seeing the other me in trouble. Oh no!

“MmmMmmMMmmMMmmMMMM! (WHY YOU i can't read IS GOING TO GET IT!!!!)” I bite his hand.

“Damn!” He yanked back his hand, “You b.tch!” He yelled.

“Boys…” He snapped his finger…uh oh…not a good sign.

I step a few feet back while they came closer to me.

“STOP!”



Who’s that?

(A/N: Don’t be confused. If you know where that part came from then good, if u doesn’t then it’s from her past life. Chapter 12.^-^v)

~End Of Dreams~

I have the weirdest dreams…but…this school…it look just like the one in my dreams.

…Weird.



Ok! Let’s go in and learn!!!



“Excuse me, do you know where the office is?” I ask a boy who was opening his locker.

He turned and looks at me.



….



“Um…do…you know where the office is?” I ask again.

“…Uh…I uh…yea…to the…left…no-no…right…no wait, corner….no…no…” He stuttered.

Me ---> O.o?

“I’ll…just look for it…” I slowly walked away…weird kid.

Oh well. I’ll ask another one o^-^o.



“Um, excuse me, do you know where the office is at?” I ask a girl, who was walking down the hallway.

“…”

Instead of answering me, or pointing to wherever direction, she glared at me.

???

“I know I’m ugly, you don’t have to come to my face and rub everything on me…bi.tch.” she walks away.

…?



This school is weird…



I’ll just find it myself…sleep.gif.

…Office…office…office…office…………� �.*sigh*………office…*turns corner*….office…..now if I were an office, where would I be?……office….office….I’d be in school! =D! That’s number one clue! XD!

…sleep.gif…office…

“Oh I give up!” I yelled.

I quickly ask a person nearby, “Do you know where the office is?”

It happened to be a boy, he annoyingly turned and looks at me, then his jaws dropped, putting on his best smiles…he answered, “It’s down the corner over there, to the left.”

=D!

“Thank you! ^^.” I bow happily, then skipped to the office.

“Wait.” I heard him from behind me.

“Yea?” I turned around.

“What’s your name?”

“…Um…”

My mom always told me to not tell my name to stranger…so I can’t tell him.

“I can’t tell you. Sorry.” I bow once again and left.



Office…

Office…ah…there it go!

I happily walked in.

“Um excuse me, I’m new here and I---“

“Oh. The new student. You’re Ahn Han Byul right?”

The lady asked me.

I nodded and smiled.

“Alright. Here’s your uniform, and your schedule.” She politely hand me my uniform and scheduled.




“How many time to I have to tell you?!? Huh?!?”

I heard yelling, I saw a room, with wide glass, I could see clearly that there was a boy and a teacher. The teacher was yelling at the boy as the boy was just ignoring him.

“Who’s that?” I ask the lady.

“Oh him? He’s a trouble maker, just don’t get involve with him.”

“What’s his name?” I ask, hey, I don’t want to get close to him, so indeed, I have to know his name so I would know whom I’m speaking to whenever I need help on anything.

“TaeHyung. Yoo TaeHyung.”



That name…TaeHyung…




I will not get involve with him! >.<!





“Ok. Thank you!…hey…where’s the bathroom?”


”Down the hall to the right.”

“OK.” I look at the boy once more, he was turning his head my way, but I already look away and walked down the hallway.



Lalala~!

….

Lalala~

Here I am.

I changed into my uniformed and went to my first hour.

…Where is it?



Ah…here it is^^.

I entered the classroom.



Silence.

I nervously bow to the teacher.

“Hello. I’ve been place into this class.” I hand the schedule to the teacher.

He took it and looks at it carefully.

“Very well. You can introduce yourself to the class…Class! We have a new student!”

I turned and look at the students, then puts on my best smiles, “Hello. I’m Ahn Han Byul. I hope we all could be friends^^.” I bow.

After saying that, I sat down on an empty seat.

“Hey sexy.” A guy behind me tapped my shoulder.

Me ---> O.O!

My mom always tells me to stay away from guys like him. And…she’s right! They ARE perverts!
>.<!

I felt very very uncomfortable right now.

“Turn around and talk to me.” I felt him touching my hair.



“Stop bothering me.” I told him.

“Ohh. She just told you dawg!” I heard some guy laughs.

“Sexy, I just wanna see your beautiful face.” I could tell that he was smiling.



I was angry…because he was fooling around with me. o>.<o

“Turn around…”

Will he stop?!? >.<!

“If you won’t then I won’t stop bothering you.”



I angrily turned around, ready to yell at him, no one has ever make me this mad.

But I widen my eyes.

His face was so close to mine that the tip of his nose touched MY nose.



He…

Looks…..





Familiar.





“I know I’m hot.” He smiled.

I’ve seen him before.



*Gasp*


“Shut your trap, b.tch.” The guy covered my mouth while I struggled to get out.

What’s going on??? I look down below, I was seeing the other me in trouble. Oh no!

“MmmMmmMMmmMMmmMMMM! (WHY YOU i can't read IS GOING TO GET IT!!!!)” I bite his hand.

“Damn!” He yanked back his hand, “You b.tch!” He yelled.

“Boys…” He snapped his finger…uh oh…not a good sign.

I step a few feet back while they came closer to me.

My dreams!

It was HIM…



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Daisuke Niwa
28-03-2008, 10:10 PM
Interesting story:D Thanks for sharing:huglove:
p/s:Han Byul is so cute:sr:

qui nho
18-06-2008, 04:02 PM
Awww... It's a lovely story!!! So cute! Why not continue?

pe_mom
26-06-2008, 11:13 AM
A child needs the love from parents than other.Me too,I want to be rich about the love,not the money!