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El Condor Pasa (If I Could)
Lyrics by Simon & Garfunkel


I'd rather be a sparrow than a snail.
Yes, I would.
If I could,
I surely would.
I'd rather be a hammer than a nail.
Yes, I would.
If I only could,
I surely would.

Away, I'd rather sail away
Like a swan that's here and gone.
A man gets tied up to the ground.
He gives the world
Its saddest sound,
Its saddest sound.

I'd rather be a forest than a street.
Yes, I would.
If I could,
I surely would.
I'd rather feel the earth beneath my feet.
Yes, I would.
If I only could,
I surely would.

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

My favorite song!!!! it is from Peru and translated to English.....
I'm not good at translation. I am afraid that I can not keep the original meaning.
Someone will help you!!!!!

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Bài hát này hạt bụi của tớ dịch cho tớ ròy :dance:

Mọi ngừi dịch giùm tớ câu lày nhé:


Kỷ niệm hok là gì khi lòng ngừi vội xóa

Nhưng sẽ là tất cả khi lòng ngừi mãi ghi.

[silver]

Memories aren't anything when they're to be erased
But they'll be all there is if your heart is where they're meant to stay.

or

Memories are nothing when they aren't meant to be treasured
But are everything if our hearts are willing to take them in.

or

Memories doesn't mean anything when they ain't to be remembered
But they're everything if they stay in your heart forever.


Doesn't sound very... poetic and smooth but.... whatever....... -_-"
Hope this helps ^^

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Memories are nothing when your heart is to be erased

But they'll be all there are if they stay in your heart forever.

Tớ ráp lại từ những câu trên kia :dance: chắc có sai ngữ pháp nhưng tớ hok bik cách sửa :so_funny:

Thank you so much :huglove:

[Hoa Phượng Đỏ]

But they'll be all there are if they stay in your heart forever.

I think it'll sounds better if it was "But they all will be there if they stay in your heart forever". I dont know how to translate but the sentence sounds weird so I was just fixing it around :D

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

Let me try!

Memory is nothing if you want to forget it
But it is all if you want to keep it in your heart.

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

I think it'll sounds better if it was "But they all will be there if they stay in your heart forever". I dont know how to translate but the sentence sounds weird so I was just fixing it around :D


Your sentence is great about grammar, but it somehow changes the meaning of the original one.

When I read you sentence I understand that: Your memories will stay in your heart if they are there. Of course they are in someone heart if that is the place they stay.

[^^ZhiXiang^^]

I just want to try little som' something..... :anhPha:

Memories are vain when they're meant to be erased
But are everything when they're meant to be treasured

sorry, my english are soooooooooo bad lately :chayle:

[Hoa Phượng Đỏ]

Your sentence is great about grammar, but it somehow changes the meaning of the original one.

When I read you sentence I understand that: Your memories will stay in your heart if they are there. Of course they are in someone heart if that is the place they stay.

I know, that's why I said i dont know how to translate very good ^^ and when you translate something, you can't have the same exact meaning anyways :/ well sometimes, but not all :D

[^^ZhiXiang^^]

I know, that's why I said i dont know how to translate very good ^^ and when you translate something, you can't have the same exact meaning anyways :/ well sometimes, but not all :D

true, there is a gap between languages. therefore sometimes we cant translate it the same exact meaning. Also, dont try to keep it tooo close, or it'll sound weird too :5: