ai dám đối thơ tiếng anh với tui ko nào

[long_co_nương]

(thơ lục bát đó) :
My love come back to me
You drive me mad any time nơw
I am so dơwn and out
Without your heart ,Without your soul
My live feel with sorow
I know you hurt and so do I
Thought time keep passing by
I'll live , I'll work , I'll die fỏ you

[us_cay]

Thơ thế này ai mà đối nổi.
Việt đã khó,Anh càng khó hơn
Để lần sau "chú" ra đề khác.
"Chị" sẽ đối cho "chú" bít tay.

[Kiếplangthang]

if i come back to you
i die sooner than you right now
i know you think about
your heart is sore,your soul is hurt
i believe you so much
but i can't give my heart for you
i hope you don't blue
and find new love near you all life. ^_^
hơi dỡ đừng chê hiiiiii

[simbat1080]

Hì hì nhiều lục bát quá rồi, giờ đến thất ngôn tứ tuyệt nè

DRAGONFLY
You smile like the Sun shines
Erase darkness in my mind
When we met I go stupid
When you fly I just whatch and cry...

[toan khung]

trùi ui !!!
tiếng việt thì làm chưa ra thì làm sao mà ra TA đc

[heo con ũn ĩn]

Heo con nhào dô lìn :D

Eating is the same as love
You should taste the smell of candy
Lady is the killer of heart
break your soul to deep dark coffee ^.^:cungly:

:bath:

[long_co_nương]

được lém xem nè:
When you look up, into the star filled sky
any day I'd surrender for you I would die.
I promise with the moon and the stars way above,
I'll dream of you forever, and only you I'll send my lovẹ

I'll lie with you forever, until the sun should burn out
I want to lie forever, please never doụbt
I make this promise, and I intend to keep it,
until the day the earth has no summit.

Ill be yours, till the end of lifẹ
But life will end, the sun will die
the stars will stop, Íll get up from where we lie...

Love can be forever, and this time it is and true
because now until forever, I'll swear that I Love You for ever

sao ngạc nhiên chưa

[heo con ũn ĩn]

Dòng thơ thức ăn của Heo Con là bất tận :D

May i love your candy lips
May i light up your soul
Dream too much is the way to live
Live without the tounge of your face ^^

Làm thơ phải chứng tỏ bài đó của mình chứ bạn.... bạn có thể làm thơ thức ăn ko? :D

[long_co_nương]

éc bái phục
:) ah` mà cậu là heo thiệt hả

[heo con ũn ĩn]

Éc , Piggy is my name :D

[long_co_nương]

tuy ko làm được thơ thức ăn nhưng tui làm thơ khác được :
I'll see the beauty in your eyes
I'll feel the treasure in your soul
Nothing but love flows from inside my heart
To you, only you alone till the end of time

In the costly table from my heart
I chose to write your name in my mind
Everything you've done for me in the past
Will ever remain in the archive of my heart

In the depth of my precious soul
You'll find nothing but only your words
All the things said since we began
Have become my treasure and my wealth for life

I'll never know how and why in life
I use to feel this way all the time
As long as you're the reason behind
I chose to feel the same till I die

You never starve me of your sweet love
To you I'll forever be grateful indeed
You always stone me with true romance
That's why I'll always love you till I die

hề hề

[heo con ũn ĩn]

éc... cứ anh anh diệt diệt nhức cái đầu TT

Well.... i think that i must make an poem about PIZZA:D

Get your hand on the fire
Make your mind on pizza
Tell me Lizza, do ya love chesse
Fell my vég ja ta bô :D

[zZalantisZz]

Alan phục Heo lun roài, nhận Alan làm đệ tử hén Heo. Công nhận tâm hồn en yống of Heo rộng thênh thang.

[Mua Sao Bang]

I am tying my hand
Cause you say that
I give you a hat
Help me hide my face

[hạ vàng (*-")]

love not now
can i say
wait long time
love more than
foreve

[hainguyen90]

look would tell a like
like would tell a date
date would tell a love
love would tell a kiss
kiss would tell something

[hainguyen90]

cả nhà chịu thua rồi hả?