I have written a passage for a long time. I think there are some mistakes in my passage. Can someone help me corrrect those mistakes? i hope i 'll get the answer " Yes"
My hometown is always an unforgetable image in my mind. My hometown is Yenhung District. It lies besides Bachdang River. From my hometown to Haiphong is not far. The distance is only twenty kilometres.
My hometown is very quiet. In it , the air is very fresh. If you walk along the streets, you can see the rows of green trees and flowers shop which make a beautiful landscape. So many old people consider my hometown to be suitable for them to have a rest. My hometown is also small but it is not boring. It has many tall buildings, shops, markets,schools and hospitals. Tourists often come to it and visit som pagodas or temples such as Tranhungdao Temple, Vuaba Temple , Giuadong Pagoda. Some areas in my hometown consider argriculture to be major economy but in other areas , most of the people are officers. The people in my HT is vey friendly. If u lose way , don't worry about that. Now , i'm away from my hometown but at free time i always come back to it. I love my hometown vey much. The simple reason is that it is the place where i was born.