Vi_kiet
05-09-2010, 11:03 PM
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Instructor’s name1
KKK
III
LLL
9/4/10
Essay # 1
Since I came to America, I always have been fascinated by the beauty that I had never seen. It made me really curious and wanted to learn everything; however, I didn’t seem adapting to the environment or not belong somewhere. I became an outsider. From an outsider I have been trying very hard to learning a new language so that could change myself and integrate into a new life.
It was hart to start over. It was the first time I went to school to learning English. I still remember the feeling of fear, not very confident when my sister -in-law took me to school. Everyone looked at me like that I was a foreigner who arrived and behave like a dull head. Everything seemed opposite to me that made I feel like an outsider. Math class started; although my speaking skills were not good but I could understand my teacher ask me to do exercises in the textbook. I looked at friends were talking how to do the exercises, except me. I did not say a word. A friend sat front of me asked like I am Vietnamese or not when a similar question wasn’t asked of others in the class. Then, I nodded my head and thought I’m an outsider again. After that, I just asked the teacher if it was necessary and didn’t talk to anyone else. I compared myself with other friends and felt so stupid.
I always had the feeling no one out there like me in this world that why I lived more isolated. Sometime, I learned English with a small group in class and my ideals didn’t seem to be shared by anyone. Many times I was desperate because I thought that I was an idiot. I was misunderstood when teacher tried to tell me do what she says. I don’t know how to do that and stare stand while the classmates were deriding me. Everything around me was so ruthless. I just wanted to give up at all and to separate myself from this world forever. One time, I was crying because of my ignorance and I ask myself what I should do, what I want to do? I did not find a person has the same situation to easily share at any time because I often refused to do something that others people have the opportunity to understand me. I told that to my parent know but they just sighed. Two day later, my mom gave me an advice that one in fourteen teachings of the Buddha “The greatest shortcoming in life is lack of awareness.” I walked in my room, close the door and thought it really make sense to me. Mean that I must try study hard. That night, I talked with a friend back in my country and she told me that my life in my hand, not in other people hand. So, I had to let people know I was not who they think I am and abandon an outsider in my thought. When I sat alone in a quiet place, I faced myself to look back what I have done and knew that was wrong.
Therefore, I decided to change myself and my life. I thought about my future if any shy and avoiding defects such as people never respected me because I have to do many things in this life. I accept my ignorance and that tried to educate knowledge. Whether I succeed or fail, I must try to rise up. After school, I participated in activities at the American Vietnamese Community. During that time, I had to communicate with many people, and felt completely contrary to previously. The feelings before that already out of my mind. For example, I could share my ideal and tried to get closer to friends. I knew as search, learned and discovered as I lived in joy and without any discrimination or any jealousy. Later, I was very happy to go back to school. Although I was not good at English but I learned so pretty good in math. So I helped my friends do the assignment in class and they also helped me learn English. I understood that when I stumbled or despaired, it was the motive to help me strive for success. I learned a French proverb “a life without a friend is a life without a sun.” Finally, I was like a member in class. I enjoyed, felt insider and couldn’t believe what I have done. I wasn’t proud of myself very much because it wasn’t my goal. I will pride whenever I have conditions to help many people with my ability.
I had to face the truth, even difficult, just the time and patience I have done it. I have overcome myself. I learned a lot from their failures such as know that a failure is mother of success. No matter what happened do not dismiss it; as it was challenging to be able to overcome
Instructor’s name1
KKK
III
LLL
9/4/10
Essay # 1
Since I came to America, I always have been fascinated by the beauty that I had never seen. It made me really curious and wanted to learn everything; however, I didn’t seem adapting to the environment or not belong somewhere. I became an outsider. From an outsider I have been trying very hard to learning a new language so that could change myself and integrate into a new life.
It was hart to start over. It was the first time I went to school to learning English. I still remember the feeling of fear, not very confident when my sister -in-law took me to school. Everyone looked at me like that I was a foreigner who arrived and behave like a dull head. Everything seemed opposite to me that made I feel like an outsider. Math class started; although my speaking skills were not good but I could understand my teacher ask me to do exercises in the textbook. I looked at friends were talking how to do the exercises, except me. I did not say a word. A friend sat front of me asked like I am Vietnamese or not when a similar question wasn’t asked of others in the class. Then, I nodded my head and thought I’m an outsider again. After that, I just asked the teacher if it was necessary and didn’t talk to anyone else. I compared myself with other friends and felt so stupid.
I always had the feeling no one out there like me in this world that why I lived more isolated. Sometime, I learned English with a small group in class and my ideals didn’t seem to be shared by anyone. Many times I was desperate because I thought that I was an idiot. I was misunderstood when teacher tried to tell me do what she says. I don’t know how to do that and stare stand while the classmates were deriding me. Everything around me was so ruthless. I just wanted to give up at all and to separate myself from this world forever. One time, I was crying because of my ignorance and I ask myself what I should do, what I want to do? I did not find a person has the same situation to easily share at any time because I often refused to do something that others people have the opportunity to understand me. I told that to my parent know but they just sighed. Two day later, my mom gave me an advice that one in fourteen teachings of the Buddha “The greatest shortcoming in life is lack of awareness.” I walked in my room, close the door and thought it really make sense to me. Mean that I must try study hard. That night, I talked with a friend back in my country and she told me that my life in my hand, not in other people hand. So, I had to let people know I was not who they think I am and abandon an outsider in my thought. When I sat alone in a quiet place, I faced myself to look back what I have done and knew that was wrong.
Therefore, I decided to change myself and my life. I thought about my future if any shy and avoiding defects such as people never respected me because I have to do many things in this life. I accept my ignorance and that tried to educate knowledge. Whether I succeed or fail, I must try to rise up. After school, I participated in activities at the American Vietnamese Community. During that time, I had to communicate with many people, and felt completely contrary to previously. The feelings before that already out of my mind. For example, I could share my ideal and tried to get closer to friends. I knew as search, learned and discovered as I lived in joy and without any discrimination or any jealousy. Later, I was very happy to go back to school. Although I was not good at English but I learned so pretty good in math. So I helped my friends do the assignment in class and they also helped me learn English. I understood that when I stumbled or despaired, it was the motive to help me strive for success. I learned a French proverb “a life without a friend is a life without a sun.” Finally, I was like a member in class. I enjoyed, felt insider and couldn’t believe what I have done. I wasn’t proud of myself very much because it wasn’t my goal. I will pride whenever I have conditions to help many people with my ability.
I had to face the truth, even difficult, just the time and patience I have done it. I have overcome myself. I learned a lot from their failures such as know that a failure is mother of success. No matter what happened do not dismiss it; as it was challenging to be able to overcome