Poetry

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

When the sun rise
I see your eyes
I see you smile and a little shy
I want to say with you
To day I fly in our love
in the sweet sky, beside you

[Daisuke Niwa]

Wow,so romantic.Thanks for sharing:D

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

Thanks a lot. I am learning writing poem

[Lãnh Huyết Tử Xà]

Hix... learn + to V......

[Daisuke Niwa]

@nam:I think it OK!I usually use like this!:D

[Hiennie*]

yead....is so so so...romantic...i'm copy that for next year :D

[Mua Sao Bang]

If I was the star, I would be a falling star
Fly in the sky and far a way
Bring your dream to come true.
If I was the cloud, I would be the white cloud
That can be found by your eyes.
If I am the one who you love
I will bring your dream become true
and always stay by your side.

[^_^wat the pee^_^]

mua sao bang: hey ur poem just reminded a message that a friend sent to me. maybe u guys also know it. it goes:
When the night comes, look at the sky. If you see a falling star, don't wonder why, just make a wish. Trust me it will come true, ‘cause I did it and I found you.
and by the way: i love ur poem and urs too (cho mot tinh yeu)

[cô bé mắc nai]

Once you said you leaving me
Then i know straight away
Love cant never be the same
To holding you back
Is seem so hardest things to do ....

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I sitting at a corner
Thinking about yesterday
I had to cry, cry, and cry...
Saw a lot of happy faces
But I'm not rhyme
And now, I'm thinking about you
What are you doing now without me?
Missing you, that's all I have to do

But I'm become stronger
Because I know you thinking about me too
I'm stronger than yesterday
And keep thinking of you!

(:D Free verse)

[Mua Sao Bang]

mua sao bang: hey ur poem just reminded a message that a friend sent to me. maybe u guys also know it. it goes:
When the night comes, look at the sky. If you see a falling star, don't wonder why, just make a wish. Trust me it will come true, ‘cause I did it and I found you.
and by the way: i love ur poem and urs too (cho mot tinh yeu)

Thank you! Not only me love watching start !"_"

[Ngày Hôm Qua]

I'm sitting here in the corner
One more time longer ...
The time we had being together
I'm feeling the cold, and wind
looking the star that is yours, and mine
and looking for the miracle ... bring we back .


hard to make it rhythm, so let it free style.

[^_^wat the pee^_^]

cho mot tinh yeu's poem reminds me sth. Hey, can i just a have small ques? does anybody know the style of poem called " Iam from"? i got a chance to create that type of poem at school and shared it with the class, and it was pretty awesome, i mean this's also a free style poem that u can talk about where ur from, this is a part of my piece, coz it's quite long..so:
I am from chopsticks, rice, noodle and rice,
From the other side of the earth,
Where my childhood memories belongs.
I am from the little cucumber and tomato garden,
From the green baby peppers and the faint aroma of watermelon.
I am from the neat and white wall of mommy’s kitchen
.....................
i think we should try this type! what u guys think?

[Mua Sao Bang]

It's kind of difficult, let try!

I am from farm, sunshine, farm and sunshine
From the place beside the Pacific
Where I grew up in love and happiness
I am from the little river, little brand of Me Kong
From the pure water, the fun of childhood
I am from the South of S-country

How do u think??

[^_^wat the pee^_^]

Bravo....pretty awesome, it seems not that difficult as u said, it's good. do u like it?

[qui nho]

If I say I love you,
will you smile
and hug me tenderly?
Or will you just look at me
coldly
like a stranger
and run away?...
:timvo: :timvo: :timvo: :timvo:

Sorry if my poem's not good enough!:fi: :fi: :fi: